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Oh, Elle.
Why must you do these horrible things to me?
Why must you put me through such pain?
Why must you write such beautiful and amazing pieces such as these? IT JUST BREAKS MY HEART.
MORE THAN BRENDONS.
Hah. No.
This was all so sad. And I love the lyric use within the dialogue. Cleverrrr.
Stupid Julia.
I'LL LOVE YOUR CHILDISH, IMMATURE SELF, BRENDON! You don't need her...
Haha. Well, I certainly enjoyed this. And I'm glad we are both writing again. It seems like forever since we've posted something. :]
The vivid description was nice, as well. It gave a real feel to the scene. [And the sadness]
I LOVED it!
Write mo', fool!
Author's response
Ahaha, yes. I thought the lyric integration was rather wonderful myself.
I enjoyed writing this a lot, and I think that is all that really matters that I am finally confidant in something I wrote.