Yeah, this was excellent. I love how deep it was - very insightful (it's getting a rate!) ... and how he would compare himself to Gerard.
And as far as doing it "right" ... I think that's the beauty of SOC ... I don't really think there is a right or a wrong. Just think about all the stuff that goes on in your own head. Sometimes it's really fragmented and weird, sometimes it's really deep and philosophical ... it's all over the board.
xD
Author's response
Thanks for coming up with the idea for the challenge. I know i chose a bit of a dark topic but it was the first thing that came into my slightly mental head and i felt i could write so freely. It was so nice just to let myself ramble and i thought it would be some big old mess but hurrah people were able to read it.
You rated me - wow thanks very much. I admit i based it on personal experience too (the feelings part anyway) and you know it felt really good to get it out. I've always felt really embarrased about it but knowing nobody here has a clue who i am gave me the freedom to do it.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review.