This is just a hilarious story and I wouldn't mind seeing more 'pissed' Harry, especially with the 'hufflepuppies.' :) I would have to say the most disappointing part of this story is that it looks like you only intend to do one more chapter. I don't think this could be made into a long story like Marriage Contracts or Act of Betrayal, but I would imagine that it could be a really fun 4-5 chapter story.