Review for 17 Days

17 Days

(#) izziebella 2009-01-01

This is really a terrible story ... I mean what's going on in it and all. I'm making everyone feel terrible!

Yeah, this chapter made me cry...It was full of emotion and the nightmare sequence was very well written.

Sorry that I haven't reviewed the past two chapters...but I'll read a chapter of this and I'll feel like completely speechless. This story is really good. I really felt like I was there when this all was happening.

I feel kinda sorry for Cat too, 'cause she had to deal with everything that was going on with him at the time, and I can kind of
symphasize with her.

I think that this whole story is very insightfull and moving and you do a great job portraying the way that Gerard feels.

This is the best chapter yet. (although all of them are amazing.)

I would rate it, but I'm out of rating points...I'll rate it on sunday.

Izzzibee

Author's response

Thank you ... for reading and for reviewing.