How many times are you going to post this story? Makes one wonder if you're just trying to get it back to the top of the first page...
Oh. Don't appologize in your summary, it makes you come off as juvenile.
Author's response
Firstly, I am Juvenile. I'm sixteen, and proud to still be a kid (In the US, at least.)
Second, FicWad did something to my first chapter, so I had to reload it. The rest of the story, now completed, is on my main website.