Heh. Twisted. Really well done, imho though. Not everyone can write shit like this (I myself, am one of those people that can, so I feel like I can talk about it with authority or some strange thing). Loved the little bits of sick humor thrown in there - really makes for great insight into the mindset of the character. You've set up a nice original story line here ("What they do to guys like us ..." I can see might have been the spark, but you took the scissors and ran with them here) so it will be interesting to see where you take it.
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Aw, man...I'm just gonna tell you this: don't expect too much. Thanks for reading.