the dream was really well written and very i don't really know the word for it, like I seriously felt it.
I really liked the new POV that you put in here and how it's symbolic about what's going on with Gerard in the moment. I mean nothing seems to relly be steady or guaranteed at the moment.
I felt kinda dissapointed that he drank again, but I guess it was something that he had to do for himself.
This was another amazing chapter.
XO=Izzzibee
Oh yeah, I probably won't be reviewing or reading this for a while 'cause I think my dad's taking my computer away since I cussed out his fiancee (or however you spell it.) So yeah, bye for now lol.
Author's response
Thank you!
I'm glad you picked up on the symbolism and all that ... and how everything was all kind of "up in the air" ... I wanted to build it up so you really didn't know what was going to happen.
And I'm also glad that people are feeling disappointed about the "last drink". Glad I was able to make you all feel that.
Good luck on the computer thing ... maybe your dad will let you keep it.