+1 Moving
Why did that seem like the end of story? I know you wouldn't leave us hanging like that! haha
The whole chapter was just so terribly sad and touching... beautifully written! The last scene with Gerard in the coffee shop was perfect, i can totally see him finding comfort in a large jug of bitter coffee =)
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I have to say I really have no idea where you are going with this story, I mean I don't see how you can fix the couple without it being totally corny and out of place, so I'm really excited to see how you do it! I know you have something up your sleeve ;)
Take care!
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Author's response
Hmmm, I know it does seem like the end of the story though I didn't write it with that intention. And wow, it has been over two months since I've updated this story...
I'm glad the last scene stuck with you, it was an image I had in my head for a long while.
I don't want to screw up the story completely but I'm not feeling very creative lately and like you said writing the rest without sounding corny is going to be hard work so I'm gonna try really hard. I've had some ideas from the beginning but if I can write them all down it's going to take a while - like the rest of this story. Things don't happen fast in this story now, do they?
Anyway, thanks =)
You take care, too!