I _like_ it! Please keep it up.
I would echo the caution about going easy on the harem thing. You already have the uberHarry thing going, albeit with an interesting twist. As for pairings, I'm partial to Hermione, but basically, ABG (anyone but Ginny) will do.
Author's response
If I was doing a harem story I wouldn't go above seven people, and it would probably fall apart pretty quickly. I don't see Hermione as a love interest for Harry; it seems more of a one shot. I agree with you about Ginny though. How her behavior changes from book two to the end just seems unnatural. She is introduced as a desperately shy girl, unwilling to be in Harry's presence to the love of his life. Where did JKR get that from? Anyway, that's enough complaints from me. I should probably get back to writing the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
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