First off, Welcome to FicWad =)
Secondly, well done. I never usually like Same sex pairings but this was sweet. It wasn't rushed into anything and the way everything was described was amazing.
You could really feel the guilt Frank felt for betraying Mikey- I felt like I was there, watching the colour drain from his eyes.
Great write up!
Can't wait for more of your stuff!
dondon xo.
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i'm sure i've already thanked you on myspace but just in case, thank yoouu :D xo