I liked it. I agree that it ended too soon, but I love your writing, so even if it was 5 more chapters I still would have been sad that it was over.
I hope that your muse returns. You've never limited your self to keeping with cannon from the latest book, don't feel the need to do so now.
I really enjoy your works and miss it when you don't have something new. Now I think I may go reread something from Fiction alley (which you need to repost here... :) ) for old times sake.
Thanks for the ride!