I am a sucker for your writing. It's so appealing! Sick humour like that, and characters like this Gerard intrigue me so much, it's a little odd. But I'm the type who'll read books of serial killers for pleasure. Some more of this would be amazing actually, even if you don't think much could come of it, I think you have the potential to take it far!
Author's response
Thank you so much for reading my stuff, i could smother you, but I dunno, I'm still trying to find the approrpriate beginning for the next chapter...