Good God that was a slog!
53 chapters read over 4 days. 440000+ words before the first kiss between Harry and Gabrielle - talk about drawing something out - it was agonising!
You might also consider booking Harry into the hospital wing at some point - it appears he's suffering from a complete loss of spine! Doormat Harry is not something I enjoy.
Half a million words of Harry basically saying "woe is me".
Author's response
Thank you for your commetns. It is nice to see someone post them. I understadn what you are saying but I still see Harry is still very much a shy teenager, but I note your points.
Cheers
Easysurfing