Yes, I already know I reviewed this and I read it a second time. So i'll just say again I really love this story. This is more of a note though. I responded to your help with one of my stories and said I'd use it and credit you. I've decided instead to do it myself because even though I thought how you re-did my paragraph was great I want to do it myself. I just think it's a bit lazy of me just to use your's. Plus, I won't learn anything either. Thankyou so much for the help though!!!
p/s I don't know if I'll go on that forum again, it depends. It's a lot of sorting out proxie sites and I can't get on to the chat room. You never know though....
xxxLeah
Author's response
Hey that's cool!
Don't feel bad about the forum thing. There's a couple people that have trouble connecting. But it's set up so that people can read stuff and not have to be logged in to.