This is great!! Keep going with it, definitely!!
Don't worry about bad ratings, I've noticed that someone seems to come in and rate down stories that are perfectly good. Whoever it is probably thinks they're funny, but you gotta feel sorry for someone who thinks like that.
Author's response
Thanks for the review, I’m glad you liked my story it made all the effort worth while. To return the lovely favour I reviewed your story. The comment on the stupid bad ratings people give for no reason also made me feel a lot happier. You’re an angel 0:) xxx