Hey, this was awesome and very realistic. I think the writing technique of repitition and writing short snappy sentences added to a real sense of anxiety and aggitation. I know what it feels like to be a recovering addict. I was never an alcohol but I misused over the counter painkiller (codein mainly). So this brought back some pretty edgy momenets for me.
Excellent job. You reveiwed my story so i'll review yours XXXX Keep writing you're brilliant!!!
Author's response
Thank you! It really means a lot to me, especially as you've been through it.
Sas x