Review for Rock Bottom

Rock Bottom

(#) Leah270193 2009-01-18

This was extremely expressive and very well written. It can be very hard to make a story with a lot of dialog have much depth but you seemed to hit the nail right on the head and do a impressive and realistic job of it. That is another thing actually; the way you wrote the speech was very natural and human. If you are not careful a lot of writers which aren’t as good as you make it sound to, well- robotic. You did a 5 star job. I encourage you to write a lot more, I, for one would definitely read it. If I remember rightly I think I even made this story one of my favourites a while ago.
Thank you for reviewing one of my stories as well, I thought I’d return the favour!!!