Good chapter! I like the pacing ... it's very "comic-booky" lol
xD
Author's response
Thanks! I know it's kinda supposed to be quite melodramatic and snappy and stuff, but, some of this is really quite hard for me to write! I don't want to go into length detail that would slow it down or rush it and make no sense. This is a tricky one for me!
Thanks for reviewing, as ever!
Sas x