Shit, that was powerful. Ya know what? I actually started to feel scared and even got a slight twinge in my jaw as I pictured that needle. I hate doctors and dentist. Especially 'cos of how I am. They look at me like I'm a fucking psychopath.Lol. No really that was awesome gave me the shakes.
I'll rate it to make you smile, after my depressing story that you kindly reviewed for me :)
xxxLeah
Oh, p.s I've never read a story in the style you did. It was really interesting and you made it very realistic, you did an superb job. Maybe try a few more like that!
Author's response
I have a big fear of the dentist (and regular doctors too for that matter)!
The POV on this was 2nd person. It's not something that's used very often but it is a good way to really put the reader in the place of the character in the story because of the use of "you" all the time. I might do a few more like that!
Thanks for the review and rate.
Yeah your story is really depressing! LOL