hello Emeraldstag, You have a very nice two chapters here and I am looking forward to reading more of this story. It is very nice to read of the story of Harry after he had defeated Voldemort and earned himself a nice life. Your story seems well crafted and organized and is a real pleasure to read. I don't know if you did this yourself or have a beta to take care of the editing but that too is very well done so that it seems seamless.
Author's response
Hi, and thank you for the lovely comment. I edited it myself as well and I can't tell you how thrilled I was by your words. It's nice to know my agonizing and very thorough process of combing over my writing is paying off. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when it comes out.