Review for The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

(#) Clayva 2009-01-24

Hi, It is my habit to review a story only after I read all the posted chapters so This review will cover all posted chapters. I am nicely impressed with the way you have taken the first book and rewritten and reorganized the information so very nicely. I am interested to see how Harry makes his friendships work in this new parameter with his parents alive and his presence in Ravenclaw. I appreciate the way in which you have rescheduled his classes so that he has an opportunity to make friends in all houses so that when he is faced with the inevitable confrontations he will have support across all the houses. The concept is well thought out and very well presented. I am looking forward to the next chapters, Carol