Okay. Well, I really liked it-- It's realistic, interesting, and has a good plot line. Nudges you along, with plenty of questions along the way.
I'm glad someone decided to write a Frerard story where they didn't just met up and have gay sex that night. There were complications, pain, and all the ups and downs a relationship really has. The characters are well defined and alive.
I teared up in some occasions, really. Sometimes I wanted to punch Gerard in the face and call him an ass, sometimes I wanted to hug him and tell him it's all gonna be okay. I pretty much always felt sorry for Frankie.
I also liked your choice of third person. It made the story flow better than just switching POV's.
You have a talent for writing. I'm looking forward to the next update. =D