Good new chapter and a great story overall so far.
One thing I am a bit concerned about is the relative 'power level' of the two worlds. So far, it seems that the Superhero/SHIELD side is vastly more powerful than the Magical side. I hope this will somehow even out, even if not completely, as crossovers that heavily favour one world can become very stale and cartoonish (pun intended).
Author's response
- In technomage I deal with this by keeping the Marvels out of the story other than small character driven cameos. In Incredible I'm dealing with it by having no actual Marvels (beyond SHIELD) making an appearance (though it's killing me not to have Steve Rogers show up and kick Harry's butt for him...)
- In technomage I deal with this by keeping the Marvels out of the story other than small character driven cameos. In Incredible I'm dealing with it by having no actual Marvels (beyond SHIELD) making an appearance (though it's killing me not to have Steve Rogers show up and kick Harry's butt for him...)