I found this chapter to be very dissatisfying. All of Harry's efforts were for nothing. He has lost everything and frankly, this chapter's ending has pissed me off. This is probably the last chapter of this story I will read. I do not like reading stories where the hero is so thoroughly fucked over.
It was a fun ride while it lasted (even if the story had too much smut).
Author's response
As always, thanx for reading and reviewing.
Well, if you don’t plan to read the last chapter you probably won’t read my response to your review, just in case, though, let me quote the great Yogi Berra.
“It ain’t over till it’s over.”
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