Heys Cryss.
So I just found out that you updated on this story after like a month. I'm terrible. Damn. But you know the reason why. But still, sorry.
I agree with lilrainforest, it was pretty painful. But vital. There needed to be a point in the story where Gerard had to reach rock bottom, and it had to affect everyone around him drastically. It needed to be put into perspective that basically Gerard needed help, because there's no way from there his situation could get worse, unless he contemplated death. Which in reality, he didn't, obviously. So all in all, I think you've handled the situation and storyline immensly well and spot on. You've made it believable and you timed the whole thing well. I'm gonna be sad when the story comes to an end but I think you're finishing it at a good time. It didn't drag on like some stories, but it wasn't short and disappointing. Well done. :)
So is the next chapter gonna be the last one? If so, take your time. Make it to how you want it.
-Emily xo.
Author's response
Thanks so much =] I'm so nervous to write the last chapter, like I said before, I'm waiting to be inspired...