I really don't want to add to the previous reviews negativity but if it's there, there must be a reason, no?
The end of this chapter bothers me a lot. Maybe it's the extreme feminist overtones then again, maybe not.
Yes, the wizarding world is male chauvinistic, but should have ALL the wizards in the world have lost their magic just because of a Dark Lord and his summoned god of Chaos? Voldemort was not the only Dark Lord in existence and now that all the women have the power, there will definitely be Dark Ladies in the immediate (read: at the exact moment magic was taken) future. The Coven can only do so much with 21 witches and a goddess of Sex. Absolute power, etc.
I hope this has given you some insight into where all the negative reviews are coming from. I look forward to the final chapter in this tale.
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, the end of this chapter did what it was designed to do, set Harry, and all my readers, up for the last chapter. Some people haven’t quite gotten the concept yet, but I am patient, I can wait. Perhaps the next Dark Mage will be a Witch, time will tell.
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