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Review for
I'm Not A Hero
I'm Not A Hero
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canustakemyheart
2009-02-04
Oh no! Where you left Mikey was not a good place at all.
I still think you're doing great with the pacing here. Obviously you can't do full on comic book pacing and still tell this story in this format. But there's action happening in every chapter.