Hi there,
It's funny great minds think alike. However I was thinking it happening with Bob. Actually the way I saw it was Bob overheard what she told Gerard and decided to do the honorable thing and bow out. He starts dating Jasmine and Mary starts to get jealous, realizing that Bob was the one she really wanted.
I shouldn't care because after reading all the chapters of this story and your other stories that I'm a fan of. You love writing Gerard and Bob is absolutely lost in this story. So get her back with Gerard and Bob will be a supporter because as I have always stated you made me feel like he really loves her and not just needs her.
I'll read this to the end.
Sorry I haven't reviewed lately my computer broke down.
Author's response
Nawww thanks
I'll look into that and continue as soon as I can hahaxx