(#) Psaid 2009-02-09
I like the Idea for the story, with the whole Harry somehow get's transported to a would where he's fiction, but fore me it would have worked better if the story only became AU after the travel between the realities, without all the changes in the first books that you have made.
Off cause that would probably have made it hard to make it a HHr ship.
You should probably go over chapter one at some point and see if you can't make the change of viewpoint more smooth, since it can be quite confusing.
Again, I like the idea, but sadly not all the changes you choose to make, so I will not be following to the end, but good luck with the story anyway.
(Just to make sure I'm not misunderstood, this is not meant to be a flame so I hope it doesn't come over as one)