Dude. I read the rest of the chapters so far, and I loved it. Not liked; loved dude. You took the story out of the author's hands and ran with it, and you did a fantastic job if I do say so myself. I can't wait to read more. ^.^
Author's response
Dude,
Thanks for the review. :)
Next chapter is 2/3rds done along with a new fic, watch this space. :p
Later
Lancelot47