Oh. My. Fucking. God.
I really did enjoy this chapter. Is it weird that I can totally picture Mikey running out of their house, in an apron, holding a spatula? Because I so totally can. That part made me smile.
:D
Man, I'd totally help with suggestions, but I lack in the imagination department, if you know what I mean. But I do think something, like, dramatic should happen. Something that will test Frank and Gerard's love. Gah, well that was my attempt at giving you a suggestion.
Anyways, great chapter. Can't wait for more :D
Author's response
Hahahah.
Nah, it's not weird 'cuz I could imagine that, too! XD
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Yeah, I know I'm going to have to something like that because I know for me at least that even reading just a love filled pile of mush gets kind of boring. (Not if its a one shot because fluffy one shots own the world. I'm talking chaptered stories that are supposed to have a plot line.) And if I get bored writing it, then I don't want to imagine what the reader's are thinking.
--Note that I'm not saying I'm bored with this story because I'm not. I love it, like it says on my profile, its my pride and joy. :D
Goodness, this was a long response. Jeez. Haha.
Well thanks for the review, I'm gonna stop with the long ass thingyy. :]]
XO
Emily