well this is the first time that I am reviewing, but I have good reason as this is the first time that I stumbled across this story.
Honestly when i read some of these fics I read the first chapter and it will either make it or break it for me.
Your story kept me going. I was tired when I started reading this at 10.40pm now Im wide awake and its 2.08am.
Firstly I think that you have an amazing talent. This story is written so well, I can not find fault to it at all.
The story has been a fantastic read and had kept me guessing, and in a way I am a little disappointed that this was the last post, I wanted to read some more.
I enjoy the drama that you have created between egan and gerard, though I would like to see them reach some what of a happy ending, but ur in charge and you are the master of these puppets.
I look forward to ur next update, which I hope will not be to far off. I will do my best to rate and review.
Keep up the excellent work, you now have you urself a devoted fan.
Chrissy x
Author's response
I do exactly the same thing with stories. You have exactly one shot to make me a reader.
Wow! You read it all in one go! I was up around two as well, just being useless and writing stuff :]
I like to think the story is unexpected, so thank you for reaffirming that belief. It means an awful lot to know that other people like what I write.
And I'm very, very glad to have you as a new fan. Thank you for the read and review.