Now you have me confused about how I feel about Bob. He has the right intentions and is just trying to help so I have to like him, but he is telling Gerard and Egan not to be together! Excuse me! Does he know how long it took them to get together in the first place? Just let them be, and quit meddling!
I'm pretty sure that about 50% of this story takes place in a hospital. It seems like it gives all the characters a chance to regroup.
Amazing as usual!
Author's response
Bob. Hmm. I don't really know how I feel about him either. I wrote the phone conversation in the way that he was supposed to be an antagonist, but now I don't know...
Yes, I've noticed that someone's usually hanging out in the hospital, needing some kind of medical attention. That's just the way they roll.
Thank you so much for reviewing!