I like the pacing here and anticipate the next chapter as it comes. I also would like to know how the other friens have been, Neville Luna and such as this has gone on.
I can't wait for the moment of truth.
dennisud
Author's response
Y'know, because the story is primarily about Harry and Hermione, Neville has small but important parts and, as much as I like her character, Luna is conspicuous by her absence.
I'll see if I can't get her to be her delightful self in a later chapter.
N!