I can't say I feel sorry for him.
I feel sorry for Ashlee and Patrick, dude.
I'm enjoying this story, I hope to hear more. And if you ever need a name for someone for Patrick I'm here... 8-)
Hahaha.
Seriously though.
I hope to see more soon, you're one of the writers on here who actually know the meanings of originality and grammar.
Author's response
Aw thanks, that's a real encouragement!
I dunno what else is gonna happen, I can't see Patrick getting with anyone though. I'm not good at romance =S But I'll bear you in mind. Hehehe.