Thank you for the quick update, this part is new.
I re-read the original by Guitargurl and I like the changes you have made.
But.
Perfesser, what are you doing? Are you Cormac McCarthy, who writes interesting characters only to kill them off? What did Mr. Kemp ever do to you?
You say it's an important clue to solving the case for Harry, and I'll trust you - this time!
Nice 'slice of life' depiction with the children on the way to grand mum's house.
My own daugher could burp as loud as her father when she was four - they would laugh and I had to be the Mommy. No fair.
Gule gule, arkadashim
Author's response
Tatlim,
the next review is the response to your review, I'm a little tired and I thought I was responding to what you had written, but I goofed.
Afedersiniz.
N!