Well, it's quite an attention-grabbing start to your story. I do feel sorry for Rose, though; finding out that she was one of the few good parts of her parents' marriage has to have hurt. All things considered, I'm not sure I can at all blame Hermione for her reaction; it's all too human given the situation. I'll be looking forward to the next several chapters as she endeavors to handle the task fate's set her.
Author's response
Hello,
Thanks for the comments,
I agree Rose has received a shit deal from Fate.
Regards,
Lancelot47