This must be the third time I've read this story, and I still can't believe how quickly Dumbledor turns on Harry.
In one sentence you say that Dumbledor is calling Harry is little angel, and the next, he's going to do what ever he can to force him away from Ginny and Potter Castle to get him under his control again. It just doesn't make sense.
Overall it is a very story - or I wouldn't keep coming back to it. But it still could be a little 'tighter' in the flow from one point to the next.
Well, on to the next chapter.
rdgale