Nicely done! I'm really enjoying the story so far, and this chapter was extremely hot! I'm really not digging on the idea that Ron and Hermione are together in any form, but that's a personal opinion, and I'm happy to go along with the story and see what happens next.
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Author's response
Ron and Hermione had to happen even if they don't stay together. JKR Had them dancing around each other since first year.
By no means does that mean they have to stay together.