Review for Blinded in chains

Blinded in chains

(#) TornAndFrayedPages 2009-04-05

Sweet!!! New chapter!!!!

I like how you ended it with the "Did I?" It makes me worry. That is some good foreshadowing right there. ('cause as much as we want them to be happy, we know SOMETHING will happen soon because otherwise it would just be boring)

You were right and Frankie was a little un-Frankieysh in this chapter, but with his dad being gone, it wasn't unbelievably un-Frankieysh so that's okay.

Update soon, please? Your story's so sweet...

XOXO
Kitty