Okay, the sequence is fixed, and wow, what a chapter. I went through the whole gamut of emotions, I wanted to scream at Harry for retreating into his shell, and cheer Hermione for calling him out on it and Neville for kicking his ass!
The scene in the Muggle Liaison Office was priceless!
Now, just fix the last chappie and it's all good.
Ribbet!
Author's response
Glad you found it enjoyable - stay tuned, more to come.
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