Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) Cateagle 2009-04-08

I like!! I don't think it's too fast as I don't remember it taking that long with my lady, many a year ago. I do agree with the comment about when the two of them agree, and Harry is far from stupid or foolish. I rather suspect it's going to rather suck to be Ginny and/or Ron as they find out that their closeness to Harry has now been severely restricted and they can't do a thing about it. Depending on how you characterize Molly and Dumbles, this could provoke some interesting events; I'm rather certain that Albus is not going to appreciate two quite brilliant, even if in different ways, witches being firmly supportive of, and bound to, Harry. His dealing, or attempting to deal with this should prove "enlightening" about him.

Author's response

Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Now that you mention it, my whirlwind romance seems to have taken root. Mrs. PerfesserN and I have been married for a while now. . .
In this story, Ginny and Ron are tertiary characters, having little or now effect on the outcomes.
Dumbles and Snape, likewise, are marginalized. Snape is still a slimy git, but he won’t suffer the same fate as canon Snape.
Dumbledore, is, of course, living on borrowed time, and, as such, is a bit distracted in this tale.
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