I love H/Hr/LL and this is a great start to one. I agree with the comment someone made above, it's a bit early for "I love yous". Other then that great story so far, I hope we get to see more soon.
Author's response
Thanx,
I agree, that if Hermione and Harry and Luna, for that matter, had only just met and hadn't faced death together then it would be too early for 'I love you', but, Harry and Hermione have known each other for the better part of six years, and have been in love without knowing it. Luna catalyzed the relationship, letting them see just how right they are together.
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