It's always good to see one of your stories posted, T. I review to tell you that far too little.
I think the setup is sound and within the bounds of canon for a post-GOF story. As usual, I enjoy your take on the characters. The baby-jealousy is a new wrinkle, but entirely believable for young adults who are still somewhat immature.
Thanks again for starting another story. I look forward to whatever you post.