(#) brad 2009-04-12
Interesting first chapter! Written well, easy to read.
I'm surprised that you made Fenrir a 'good guy' and that you've removed all the problems of being a werewolf from Harry. I guess that's in line with his becoming extra powerful and gaining his titles; this is going to be a 'super!Harry' story I gather. :-)
I didn't like Lavender's being put into Ravenclaw without a reason for the canon being changed. Or did Harry say something good about that house in the train that I missed?