this is a one of a kind story (granted a lot of stories are one of a kind) but i like it, it's really interesting, and pleaz update soon :) it makes me all fuzzy inside when i read Jon stories and i don't find many of them. and u HAVE HAVE HAVE HAVE to finish don't stop stories because only losers do that, as long as u keep updating its cool :)
Author's response
Hint: Telling me I'm going to be a loser if I don't finish the story doesn't really motivate me to write any more (lucky for you chapter 13 was already written). Actually telling me I HAVE to do anything makes me want to do the opposite. Glad you liked the story though. :)