Oh, I knew this had to be coming...she IS Gerard's daughter after all, she's going to get drunk at least once in her life...but hopefully not more than that, not after knowing what it did to her dad...
But I thought you did this so well, and I love how Mikey is just so very...Mikey, for lack of a better word, lol He's concerned, but it's all internal...he's not like Gee, where you can see every emotion he's feeling, with Mikey it's all in his head, so he wasn't too openly worried and I really really liked that.
anyway, great job! :)
Author's response
Thank you soooo much for the review. I'm so happy you liked it. Thanks for the specific comments; I like when people actually tell me what they liked about the story. I had fun writing Mikey. I'll try and get some more up soon....