Nice ending with the Dursley descendant and it's nice to think that some of the Weasley's survived.
At this point, aside from a quick visit to Hogwarts, I'm hoping you'll stick to the current issues Harry has and his immediate future rather than his history.
Hopefully he'll get a girlfriend and enjoy being a teenager for a while. His English accent should certainly - as you started - make him interesting to the girls.
Oh, one more thing- in regards to Harry being at Dudley's bedside, I'm hoping that when Harry goes back in time - if he goes back - that you won't be afraid of changing history.
Good luck with the next chapter.
Author's response
No need to worry about that. Harry knows as well as anyone can on what he can and can't do to the timeline and not cause the universe to explode. I can't say that Harry will or won't go back in time, but I can say that if and when he does it will be in cannon.
Rob