great story you have here very intresting way you have woven star trek and harry potter together although you have left mer with a lot of questions,
Did Tom die in the war or is he still floteing around somewhere,
What has happend to hogwart's
When reading this chapter i dont think that harry really spoke to dudley when he was in a coma so i dont think they will be any time travel with harry going back,
as for the magic that trys to tell harry to 'get out of england' at first i thought that was for any magic users that are not human(like vulcans or kligions) but when harry used magic the feeling got stronger so that would not deture any one being nosey about what is happening, harry finding at least one family decendent alive was a nice touch to the story, the fact that you never sent harry to hogwarts tell's me that the school might have something to do in the future chapters and what of the goblins/centars/house elves?
Author's response
Lord Snakeyness will be dealt with in another chapter as will Hogwarts. I cant comment on the way the warding is working at this time, but there is a logic to it. Other magical creatures are also going to be explained out later on as well.
Rob