I am certainly enjoying this tale. It brings back memories of watching the TOS the first time around..
if I recall correctly 'guardian at the edge of forever' was written by Harlan Ellison.
I like the Vette bit. as most, I thought it was cribbed from the movie trailer also, until I read your comment above.
I helped a guy install a clutch in one of these some years ago, and as payment for my help, he let me drive it ..130mph down Morse Rd. thing handled like crap next to my current ride, but then it WAS a 65 vette, so who cares.
great story. I am following your updates on the Yahoo groups as well as here.
my wish for this is that Harry returns to Hermione. we'll see, I guess
Author's response
I'm glad that you like it. currently my next chapter is being beta'ed as I type. Hopefully she'll get it finished soon. Several other people have suggested that I have Hermione and Harry get together in this universe. I will admit that Hermione will reappear eventually. I did post a real rough cut of that scene on one of the Yahoo groups I'm part of, perhaps you read it. It will be modified drastically, but it's still going to be the same general scene and yes, Hermione will still be in it.
Rob